Group Crit

by rnb10

Tuesday 26th November 2013

I really enjoyed the group crit today and found the feedback from both  Marianne and my peers extremely helpful with improving my exhibition piece. I was slightly lost with how I was going to finalise my piece, I did not know what I could produce to good quality with the time left that I had. 

Feedback Notes; 

  • Alzheimer’s – illustration of brain scans – degeneration.
  • Raising awareness of disease.
  • Disease can be caught at a younger age – specific age.
  • Work on paper with combination of machine and hand stitch.
  • Series of 12 images – brain sized images – collection.
  • Creative with display – doesn’t have to be on wall.
  • Series – could be more chaotic/confusion – colours show this.